my latest work....Critique it!!!

[mattspat]

Hey all,

So I recently did this short film for twilight fest called Divine Intervention. And I have set up this thread for whoever feels like watching it to give me feedback. I play the character Kurt (the drunk one).

This is by no means my best work and I had a couple hours to get the lines and what not down. Also, the audio was re-recorded back at a studio then edited into the film so the dialog may be off and what not.

Anyways enough with the excuses.

Film is called Divine Intervention and you may watch it on the list of twilight films.

Look forward to your post!

Matt

[ConspiracyPenguin]

Hm...I responded to this earlier. I wonder if posts were lost in the server update.

Basically what I said was this: It has been some time since I've seen the film but, from what I remember, my only critique had to do with the drunkenness. During the walking sequence you appeared plastered (overtly so, in my opinion) and looked at the bottle too many times. You might have been a bit heavy on the swagger too. It didn't help, though, that once you were seated and talking you didn't slur one work. I guess the moral is: consistency is something to think about.

Otherwise, you did a fine job, I would have to watch it again to see if there were any awkward line deliveries, etc, but from what I remember you did very well. Keep up the good work! :)

[Michele Seidman]

have not been able to view it yet. tried but something is off with my browser and i am trying to sort it so i can go check the new work!