Trailer work with Vegas

[anthom]

hey!

i dunno if this is the right section to post this trailer, but i used vegas only to edit it...
i wanted to get some feedback on the editing...what do u think about it?
the title effects are horrible, i kno;)

check it out here:
http://emafiabitch.blogspot.com/2008/08/e-mafia-blog-exclusive-crank-11-trailer.html

best regards,
Julian

[plainman007]

Hi Anthom.
Just my honest observations.
I liked it. Or at least parts of it are very professional.
Some parts failed to hold attention.
Too much silence and dead spots when hes walking towards cam on the sidewalk in slomo.
The background score could be something better. But all in all if its your first time. Id say youve got of the underlying principles right and you will get better at it.
Your right the titles arent up to the mark.
Its also very easy to take a block buster with awesome footage and make a trailer. Try doing it with some discovery channel movies on animals etc. Trying to capture interest in a movie like that would be a lil tougher.
Best wishes. Keep practicing with all sorts of footage.