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kubalsky
08-13-2008, 06:53 AM
Made this short film for Phils Film Competition. Mostly just stock lens with Wide Angle Adapter. My Letus Extreme arrived after I had shot most footage but you can spot the odd Letus shot on some night scenes. Footage untouched, ungraded. Sound... not so good but hey.

http://www.vimeo.com/1515609

dandobi.com
08-13-2008, 02:04 PM
did you have the shutter off ? the motion blur with your pans look pretty unforgiving :/

joe 1008
08-15-2008, 03:46 AM
Nice introduction of the monkey. But I would shorten A LOT the sequence when heīs singing. (by the way, sometimes there is an odd reddish shade in the monkey's hair)
Start the last shot, when the actor nocks the door again, later. Doesnīt look good when he walks through the sun (overexposed) and doesnīt apport anything to the story. Itīs enough to start whe he is knocking on the door.

Never fall in love with your stuff when you are editing. You have to be a coldblooded killer!:kali: