Silent Screams script

[Robbie Comeau]

Anyone who is not competing in Timefest, and wouldn't mind reading my script to give me some pointers,
and to give me your thoughts, then please PM me and I'll be glad to hand it over for you to look at.

The script is 6 pages and a bit, and it's a Horror genre.

I would love some feedback on it, and your opinions.

Nick Lane wrote it and I changed a couple things, but not a lot.

Thanks,

Robbie

[ConspiracyPenguin]

I'd be happy to read over it! Haha, maybe that wouldn't help too much since I wrote it in the first place, but I would like to see the changes you made. :thumbsup:

[dory_breaux]

Did you use any of my ideas? I dont care either way really but yeah.

[StefanHaynes]

I take that it's in no way related to the Slayer song of the same name? 'Cuz I'd totally read it if it were.

Silent Scream
Bury the unwanted child.
Beaten and torn
Sacrifice the unborn.

:engel017:

[ConspiracyPenguin]

Did you use any of my ideas? I dont care either way really but yeah.

Robie just gave me a rough first page and I polished and finsihed it up, so unless your ideas were used in the brief intro, then you can rest assured. He would have to tell you, though, cause I don't know.

[Ted Arabian]

Wouldn't you get a better response in the Screenplay/Writing forum?

Seems like you are going to find many here who ARE involved in Timefest.

Just a thought.

-Ted

[dory_breaux]

Penguin dude, does the chick get into a care and drive after whats his face then like kidnap him when he crashes?

[Raw and Vital]

I will give it a read if you'd like. I'll provide notes and my thoughts too.

Shoot me an e-mail, scriptwriter04@yahoo.com

[ConspiracyPenguin]

Penguin dude, does the chick get into a care and drive after whats his face then like kidnap him when he crashes?

No. There is a chick in a car, and kidnapping is a possibility, but these both came from my imagination, so no worries.