HPX short - coventry

[Don Schechter]

Quickly made a short out of some location footage I was shooting in New England. 300MB you can watch or download at: the url below.

I've made a few changes since this draft but who has time to wait for all that compressing? It's H264...not the best looking compressing I probably could have done....

Thoughts?

http://www.charlesrivermedia.com/coventry

[Isaac_Brody]

I like the color pallete and a lot of the compositions. Not a big fan of the woman towards the end. She doesn't really fit into the rest of the piece or the mood you set. I think some of the shots are redundant beats. I'd whittle this down and try to get it to the three minute mark. I think it'll play stronger with just the essential pulp. I like it.

[Don Schechter]

thanks for the feedback Isaac. I cut her (mostly out) rearranged her into the film more and cut some redundancy...wanted to keep the length to match the music I wrote...didn't upload the new version yet though...300MB.....