View Full Version : To LynchMob's AdFest Entry -- Women have Come Far
Kholi
08-01-2007, 09:33 PM
L O L
I died laughing. My girlfriend was watching too and she said she wants one!
LMFAO
Barry_S
08-01-2007, 09:57 PM
I was totally intrigued with the product design--very funny and hope you have it patented. :)
LynchMob
08-02-2007, 08:20 AM
Wow, it's a relief (not in the potty way) that you guys laughed. I was getting nervous after cutting it that people might not find the idea funny. I wish I recorded the conversation with the Mary (the voice over artist) when I was trying to explain how I wanted her to act out the script or when I had to convince my Wife that it was funny to stand in front of the toilet and pretend to pee or when my daughter asked me what a Kinetica was.
Brandon Rice
08-02-2007, 08:43 AM
LOL! indeed it was a hoot
martin-sfx
08-02-2007, 09:05 AM
Very creative and funny concept. Your serious and dry presentation of the product is what really makes it great. "Flow level" and "regulator" made me laugh very hard.
Good work!
Zoidoid
08-02-2007, 09:11 AM
Hehe, I liked how straight-faced this was delivered. I immediately recognized the style of commercial you were going for and it works well with the joke. Maybe my thinking is just a little off-kilter, but the word choice of "leg up" was also amusing to me for dog-and-fire-hydrant reasons. :)
Gulroc
08-02-2007, 09:18 AM
I loved this idea because I actually had an idea of how to make one of these. You're in my head. Nice work.
LynchMob
08-02-2007, 10:58 AM
Hehe, I liked how straight-faced this was delivered. I immediately recognized the style of commercial you were going for and it works well with the joke. Maybe my thinking is just a little off-kilter, but the word choice of "leg up" was also amusing to me for dog-and-fire-hydrant reasons. :)
Awesome!
I'm glad the staight-faced delievery worked. I had seconds thoughts about shooting it this way. I'm glad I didn't change it.
I put in a couple of key words that I hoped viewers would pickup including "leg up".
LynchMob
08-02-2007, 10:58 AM
I loved this idea because I actually had an idea of how to make one of these. You're in my head. Nice work.
Maybe I should start a thread in the DIY section!
Jeremy Ordan
08-03-2007, 02:19 PM
I wasn't crazy about the shot choices or the narration but the pay off made this one great.
Freaking brilliant.